dangmaster's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[T.A.T.S.I.A.R.T]

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... well i think i needed some context in this animation or something... the animation itself is okay i can clearly see you don't use black outlines and that made the left character fade away a little
music was intense.. voices was barely understand able as in i could only understand what he said in a sekound watch... like the loading bar though... "join the soup squad" kinda made me feel this was big

anyways 2 stars from me... keep it up

TophatSoup responds:

You should consider joining, I bet we would like you with this kind review.

[Ask Elvic "Eldon"]

you certainly know what you are doing here

nice presentation, nice way to show emotion and really good humor
the rock came as an surprise and kept me watching
i like your simple animation style, if it wasn't for all the minor movements with mouth, chin, finger, should etc... i would have though it was bad but you clearly putted some effort into this^^

keep it up i would diffidently like to see more from you and one question
are you prepared to answer any kind question? lol

Elvic responds:

Thank you, dangmaster! I happy you liked my cartoon! I put in some effort into this one, yeah, but I can certainly do better. And yes, I am prepared to answer any question. I realize I could be opening Pandora's box here, but I'm prepared for the worst.

[The Magic Corndog]

well okay vid i guess but everything happened 2 slow...

presentation of the show is nice but i got very bored after 30 sec
you kinda told the viewers what we should think about the stars but it would have been much better if you had used the time to threw a few jokes or 2 so we could make our own judgment of the stars
almost nothing happened in the vid seeing them run around doing "normal stuff" was not intertaining until the corndog arrived... which was interesting at first but i personally think the stars should have taken the opportunity to wish for having a strip club rollercoaster or something big like that..

the animation is done very nicely and i can see you have putted very much effort into the background, characters and their breathing, and the random stuff around. i could see many copy pasted stuff but that not a bad thing just make sure to make some minor unique detail and that's fixed.

just be sure of speeding things a little up... a long vid is not necessary a good vid and while your at it, throw some more ideas in they don't have to be new but only interresting like the wish for filling corndog.. i see potential here and you only need to work a little harder to go much further...

good try, good to see effort, but it lack ability to deliver a good show
that only brings you 2 stars this time but keep it up^^ i would like to see more form you

jaschieffer responds:

Thanks for the feed back! I can only get better.

[BOREDOM EMPIRE PART 4]

i liked that episode

haven't seen any of the other episodes though.
anyways your good at setting up the mood for this talk...
and the serious humor comes along very nicely.
the animation is very smooth and i like you take time to animate fire in the background.
i only spotted one mistake where the smoke disappeared but that doesn't matter that much.

solid 4 stars from me keep it up^^

3rabbitsproductions responds:

Thank you very much! Become a fan by all means :)

[Successful gipsy]

not bad... infact i liked it^^ though i had some truble reading the tekst cause it skipped so damn fast at point and even though the font you used gave the movie style it was still a little hard to adjust to...

but this is a good story^^ keep it up

Thaiel responds:

Yeah i apologize. Nobdicking but i read too fast and besides as i had already read it maybe i thought people would read it like that.
But as someone said below, ill try to use less text
Thnx for the comments!

[Madness Heaven Remix 4]

i like it

the timing in the song were perfect i think
the randomness and the animation in this is good
i don't think i see how you could make this better, even if you but some more quality in the movement it would ruin the flow a little but i still think this is only worth 3 stars
keep it up^^

Gibb50 responds:

Thanks for an honest review that isn't 'Awesome' or 'Lol'
I appreciate it :)

[Desent test]

i like your drawings... i like that you spendt some time too draw the spaceshipe turn and move, the characters 4-5 diffrent positions and the the thumps diffrent positions on the controller... i think you choce the right musik to the atmosphere, too bad there only was 2 scenes cause i would like to see more from you

Ansonaptor responds:

Thank you! :) there will be more soon, trust me

[MAZINGER-Z VERSION DAEP]

well this animation was a good tribute to whatever mazinger-z is

i don't know the language so i can't say for sure whats happen... but i can say that i think your sound effekts were off quite a bit... when the robot walked, i swear i thought, he only had one leg, because i only heard "the stomp" from a leg at the time. i also think some your scene shifts were too suddenly. the animation were quite smooth at some point but often felt very forced, drawins were quite good but i missed some more movement from the drawings, all in all this is an okay animation not worth more than 1,5 stars but keep it up^^

daeperez responds:

thanks the advice always helps me improve

[Grom vs. Brom]

oookay....

the joke were good....

but what with that fighting, seriously i looked retardet
like ragdolls

undertoon responds:

hahaha. . . Not all the superheroes are good as fighters

[Pokemon: Pee Red Version]

soo... i scrued my life

here we are watching the awsome made cartoon of what so ever
and i began to thing

why the hell did i play pokemon

OrangePylon responds:

You wanted to have some fun?