this seems very "artistic"
this animation is the kind that makes me watch it again and again to figure out what it truly means
i like your 3 simple colors and how you animated them... but it goes a little too fast at start.
the animation itself is also very smooth and you have a good technique
you get 3 stars from me cause i believe that what you mostly can get from this
keep it up^^
... well i think i needed some context in this animation or something... the animation itself is okay i can clearly see you don't use black outlines and that made the left character fade away a little
music was intense.. voices was barely understand able as in i could only understand what he said in a sekound watch... like the loading bar though... "join the soup squad" kinda made me feel this was big
anyways 2 stars from me... keep it up
You should consider joining, I bet we would like you with this kind review.
i enjoyed that video very much
your animation is really smooth and i liked that you took your time at the beginning but after seeing that for around 2 min the rest of the video felt "hasted" or something like that
as mentioned this video is smooth and nice, the position of the female felt a little of at some point but that doesn't matter, the sound is great but felt a little off at the end and the scene shifts very nicely done.
i see gr8 potential here and i want you to keep it up^^
one question though... you mentioned that you did everything by yourself... did that include the female voice :p
nah . i got the voice from an adult video hehe. i just did the editing
you certainly know what you are doing here
nice presentation, nice way to show emotion and really good humor
the rock came as an surprise and kept me watching
i like your simple animation style, if it wasn't for all the minor movements with mouth, chin, finger, should etc... i would have though it was bad but you clearly putted some effort into this^^
keep it up i would diffidently like to see more from you and one question
are you prepared to answer any kind question? lol
Thank you, dangmaster! I happy you liked my cartoon! I put in some effort into this one, yeah, but I can certainly do better. And yes, I am prepared to answer any question. I realize I could be opening Pandora's box here, but I'm prepared for the worst.
well okay vid i guess but everything happened 2 slow...
presentation of the show is nice but i got very bored after 30 sec
you kinda told the viewers what we should think about the stars but it would have been much better if you had used the time to threw a few jokes or 2 so we could make our own judgment of the stars
almost nothing happened in the vid seeing them run around doing "normal stuff" was not intertaining until the corndog arrived... which was interesting at first but i personally think the stars should have taken the opportunity to wish for having a strip club rollercoaster or something big like that..
the animation is done very nicely and i can see you have putted very much effort into the background, characters and their breathing, and the random stuff around. i could see many copy pasted stuff but that not a bad thing just make sure to make some minor unique detail and that's fixed.
just be sure of speeding things a little up... a long vid is not necessary a good vid and while your at it, throw some more ideas in they don't have to be new but only interresting like the wish for filling corndog.. i see potential here and you only need to work a little harder to go much further...
good try, good to see effort, but it lack ability to deliver a good show
that only brings you 2 stars this time but keep it up^^ i would like to see more form you
Thanks for the feed back! I can only get better.
i liked that episode
haven't seen any of the other episodes though.
anyways your good at setting up the mood for this talk...
and the serious humor comes along very nicely.
the animation is very smooth and i like you take time to animate fire in the background.
i only spotted one mistake where the smoke disappeared but that doesn't matter that much.
solid 4 stars from me keep it up^^
Thank you very much! Become a fan by all means :)
haha nice 1 there m8
the title perfectly match the vid and your style is great
i love your modeling style and bloody mess but i must admit i don't get why the yellow one would turn his back on the grey one... but who cares it is a clay fight!
the ending came unexpected too and was a good twist
doesn't need context but giving the protagonist a little more screen time to show he about to get revenge wouldn't hurt a bit
could have been better to if there have been a little more fighting like they dodged, parried or blocked the chainsaw thing instead of just a quick massacre
i think you earned a solid 4 stars from me
made me think "whats the hells is going on here" which i think was your goal
if not.... then nice try i guess
anyways like your animation, like drawings, the alien that walked could have been much better though you handled it well, sounds effect where nice too really liked the street lamp, background noise were annoying in my opinion and the mystery was a little hasted but well performed
keep it up^^
not bad... infact i liked it^^ though i had some truble reading the tekst cause it skipped so damn fast at point and even though the font you used gave the movie style it was still a little hard to adjust to...
but this is a good story^^ keep it up
Yeah i apologize. Nobdicking but i read too fast and besides as i had already read it maybe i thought people would read it like that.
But as someone said below, ill try to use less text
Thnx for the comments!
i like it
the timing in the song were perfect i think
the randomness and the animation in this is good
i don't think i see how you could make this better, even if you but some more quality in the movement it would ruin the flow a little but i still think this is only worth 3 stars
keep it up^^
Thanks for an honest review that isn't 'Awesome' or 'Lol'
I appreciate it :)
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